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Grill · 28 Oct · Round 1 of 2

Vedic Astrology Chart landing page review

45
Undercooked

Higher than 7 of the 41 other launches on the public record (17%)

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Each dot is one launch’s latest public grill · 29 Oct

“The page asks for personal data before explaining who it is for or why they should care.” 

First viewport of Vedic Astrology Chart as captured

What we read, 28 Oct at 00:01, at laptop width.

Visit vedicastrologychart.net
Clarity35%
64
+22.4
Audience18%
14
+2.5
Offer29%
36
+10.4
Proof18%
56
+10.1
The sum 45.4, so
45
Measured, not scored
What the page does, not what it says.
measured 28 Oct · our browser, desktop 1280 × 800 · link check · axe-core
Largest paint, desktop
3.4 s
target ≤ 2.5 s
Layout shift
0.001
target ≤ 0.1
Links on the page
0 broken
25 checked; 1 could not be checked
Accessibility
3 issues
buttons must have discernible text; document should have one main landmark; all page content should be contained by landmarks

These do not change the score. The score comes only from the 18 tests; speed and accessibility are reported beside it because a slow or broken page loses people before they read a word.

First grill
Five things to fix before launch day.

5
to fix
2
strengths
5 to fix

What will go wrong on launch day.

Fatal · they leave before they understandCostly · they understand and still leaveDrag · it works, and could work better
  1. 01FatalAudience · A3 failup to +4.5
    “Birth Details form”

    a stranger is asked for sensitive birth data before they know why they should trust the tool

    Proposalyou decide
    Place a section above the form stating the specific problem this tool solves for the user
  2. 02CostlyProof · P3 partialup to +3.8
    “AI Interpretation Preview”

    visitors cannot see the actual chart they are generating, making the 'Free Chart' promise feel abstract

    Proposalyou decide
    Add a high-resolution screenshot of a completed Vedic chart next to the AI preview
  3. 03CostlyClarity · C2 partialup to +6.0
    “Discover Your Vedic Astrology Chart”

    the headline describes the tool's function, not the result the user gets from using it

    Proposalyou decide
    Replace headline with the outcome, e.g., 'Understand Your Life Path with a Vedic Astrology Chart'
  4. 04DragOffer · O4 failup to +8.1
    “no reason to act now”

    visitors bookmark the page and never return because there is no cost to waiting

    Proposalyou decide
    Add a launch-specific offer or a limit on free AI summaries for the first [number] users
  5. 05DragClarity · C3 partialup to +6.0
    “Professional Grade”

    the phrase is a generic adjective that provides no factual evidence of quality

    Proposalyou decide
    Replace with a fact, e.g., 'Powered by Swiss Ephemeris'
2 strengths

Don’t break these.

  • The 'Free and paid access' section clearly distinguishes the three levels of service.
  • The 'Vedic vs Western Astrology' section provides a clear, factual reason for the product's existence.
15 points to Cooked

Level 2 of 4 Undercooked

all open: 74
now 45
0406080
5
left to fix
+29
points in reach
74
could reach · Cooked
Badges
  • ✓First grill
  • Cooked — reach 60
  • Well done — reach 80
  • Before and after — finish round 2
Every point from a test

The four axes

Every point comes from a test. Open a row, or read the rubric.

Clarity35% of the score
64
C1
Generate a free basic Vedic astrology chart
pass
C2
Discover Your Vedic Astrology Chart
partial
C3
Professional Grade
partial
C4
First viewport focuses solely on generating the chart
pass
C5
GENERATE YOUR FREE CHART
pass
3 passed · 2 partial · 0 failed → 64. Weighted at 35%, this contributes 22.4 of the overall 45.
Audience18% of the score
14
A1
no audience named on the page
fail
A2
uses terms like 'nakshatras' and 'dashas'
partial
A3
Birth Details form appears before any problem is stated
fail
A4
addresses the person seeking the chart
pass
1 passed · 1 partial · 2 failed → 14. Weighted at 18%, this contributes 2.5 of the overall 45.
Offer29% of the score
36
O1
PRICING link in navigation
pass
O2
Free and paid access section explains tiers but not prices
partial
O3
pricing page not provided
partial
O4
no reason to act now stated in copy
fail
O5
Basic chart calculation is free, with no sign-in required
pass
2 passed · 2 partial · 1 failed → 36. Weighted at 29%, this contributes 10.4 of the overall 45.
Proof18% of the score
56
P1
50,000+ Charts Generated
pass
P2
4.9/5 User Rating has no source
partial
P3
AI Interpretation Preview is text only; no actual chart image
partial
P4
claims are proportionate to a tool launch
pass
2 passed · 2 partial · 0 failed → 56. Weighted at 18%, this contributes 10.1 of the overall 45.
22.4 + 2.5 + 10.4 + 10.1 = 45.4 → 45.
Full page read. Pricing page not assessed as it was behind a link.

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