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Four things to fix before launch day.
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strengths
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What we read · 20 Sept, 14:06
“Strong targeting and clarity, but zero verifiable proof and a CTA that leads to a signup form.”
Level 3 of 4 · Cooked
9 points to Well done
all open: 100
now 71
Raw 0–39UndercookedCooked 60Well done 80
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- Before and after — finish round 2
What will go wrong on launch day
Fatal · they leave before they understandCostly · they understand and still leaveDrag · it works, and could work better
- CostlyProof · P2 partialup to +4.1Potential problem
“Illustrative example — not a projection or guarantee of returns”
The visitor sees a demo but has no evidence that the tool provides real-world value to other humans.
Proposalyou decideAReplace one illustrative example with a named user testimonial and the specific decision they simulated. - CostlyClarity · C5 partialup to +6.7Potential problem
“[Try Your First Simulation →](/signup)”
A visitor expecting an immediate tool experience is stopped by a registration wall and leaves.
Proposalsyou decide which, if anyAChange the label to "Create Account to Simulate".BProvide a guest-access demo simulation before requiring signup. - DragOffer · O4 failup to +10.4Potential problem
“₹999 one-time”
The low price is attractive, but the lack of urgency encourages bookmarking instead of buying.
Proposalyou decideAAdd a limited-time launch price or a countdown to the end of the one-time offer. - DragAudience · A3 failup to +7.9Potential problem
“Before you make a big money decision, simulate it.”
The solution is presented before the pain, missing the chance to build emotional tension.
Proposalyou decideAMove the "Big money decisions shouldn't be guesses" section above the first CTA.
Don’t break these
Keep the India-specific terminology (SIP, EPF, PPF) as it qualifies the audience instantly.
Keep the "Buy ₹80L house vs. Rent + Invest" comparison as it demonstrates the core outcome.
The four axes
Every point comes from a test. Open a row, or read the rubric.
Clarity35% of the score4181
41
C1
India-first financial simulation
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pass
C2
See how today's decision could change your financial future
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pass
C3
Headline is free of jargon like 'seamless' or 'AI-driven'
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pass
C4
Focuses on one promise: simulating big money decisions
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pass
C5
[Try Your First Simulation →](/signup)
partial
partial
4 passed · 1 partial · 0 failed → 81. Weighted at 35%, this contributes 28.4 of the overall 71.
Audience18% of the score3156
31
A1
India-first; Built around how Indians actually manage money
pass
pass
A2
Uses terms like SIP, EPF, PPF, NPS
pass
pass
A3
Product 'simulate it' is in the headline; pain 'shouldn't be guesses' is below the fold
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fail
A4
Addressed to the person making the financial decision
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pass
3 passed · 0 partial · 1 failed → 56. Weighted at 18%, this contributes 10.1 of the overall 71.
Offer29% of the score4164
41
O1
Pricing section at the bottom of the page
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pass
O2
Free vs Pro ₹999 one-time
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pass
O3
₹999 one-time is reasonable for a lifetime financial tool
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pass
O4
No launch price, limit, or cost of waiting stated
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fail
O5
Free tier and 'no renewal' for Pro
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pass
4 passed · 0 partial · 1 failed → 64. Weighted at 29%, this contributes 18.6 of the overall 71.
Proof18% of the score3177
31
P1
Screenshots of the Scenario Builder
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pass
P2
Illustrative example — not a projection or guarantee of returns
partial
partial
P3
Actual product interface is visible in screenshots
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pass
P4
Honest about using illustrative examples rather than claiming thousands of users
pass
pass
3 passed · 1 partial · 0 failed → 77. Weighted at 18%, this contributes 13.9 of the overall 71.
28.4 + 10.1 + 18.6 + 13.9 = 70.8 → 71.
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