First grill
Four things to fix before launch day.
4
to fix
2
strengths
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What we read · 28 Sept, 14:49
“The page is technically excellent but distracts from its value with an overly complex rebate program.”
Level 3 of 4 · Cooked
6 points to Well done
all open: 100
now 74
Raw 0–39UndercookedCooked 60Well done 80
4
locks on this page
+26
points in reach
100
could reach · Well done
Badges
- ✓First grill
- ✓Cooked — reached 60
- Well done — reach 80
- Before and after — finish round 2
What will go wrong on launch day
Fatal · they leave before they understandCostly · they understand and still leaveDrag · it works, and could work better
- CostlyOffer · O4 failup to +9.3Potential problem
“Get the month back section”
A visitor spends more time reading complex rebate rules than the product's core value proposition.
Proposalyou decideAMove the detailed rules to a separate page; keep a one-sentence summary on the main page. - DragOffer · O2 partialup to +4.3Potential problem
“Most people pick this (under Monthly)”
The buyer is nudged toward the most expensive long-term option rather than the best value.
Proposalyou decideAMove the 'Most popular' tag to the Yearly plan. - DragAudience · A1 partialup to +4.1Potential problem
“Claude Keychain stores your API keys”
A visitor who doesn't know Claude Code may not realize the tool is specifically for them.
Proposalyou decideAAdd 'For developers using Claude Code' to the sub-headline. - DragClarity · C5 partialup to +6.6Potential problem
“Get Keychain for $4/mo”
The visitor is unsure if they are entering a checkout, a sign-up, or a download.
Proposalyou decideAChange the label to 'Buy and Download Keychain'.
Don’t break these
The comparison table in section 03 clearly differentiates the product from the status quo.
Pricing is transparent and immediately visible in the first viewport.
The four axes
Every point comes from a test. Open a row, or read the rubric.
Clarity35% of the score4181
41
C1
menu bar app
pass
pass
C2
without the .env files
pass
pass
C3
no jargon in headline
pass
pass
C4
one promise: API key management
pass
pass
C5
Get Keychain for $4/mo
partial
partial
4 passed · 1 partial · 0 failed → 81. Weighted at 35%, this contributes 28.4 of the overall 74.
Audience18% of the score3177
31
A1
Claude Keychain stores your API keys
partial
partial
A2
.env files, shell history, repo
pass
pass
A3
without the .env files
pass
pass
A4
addressed to the developer
pass
pass
3 passed · 1 partial · 0 failed → 77. Weighted at 18%, this contributes 13.9 of the overall 74.
Offer29% of the score31149
311
O1
$4/mo in first viewport
pass
pass
O2
Most people pick this (under Monthly)
partial
partial
O3
$4/mo is standard for dev tools
pass
pass
O4
Get the month back section
fail
fail
O5
48-hour refund
pass
pass
3 passed · 1 partial · 1 failed → 49. Weighted at 29%, this contributes 14.2 of the overall 74.
Proof18% of the score4100
4
P1
screenshots of the app
pass
pass
P2
400+ services recognized
pass
pass
P3
UI visible in screenshots
pass
pass
P4
no exaggerated claims
pass
pass
4 passed · 0 partial · 0 failed → 100. Weighted at 18%, this contributes 18.0 of the overall 74.
28.4 + 13.9 + 14.2 + 18.0 = 74.4 → 74.
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