First grill
Six things to fix before launch day.
6
to fix
2
strengths
48
Undercooked
Round 1 of 2
What we read · 16 Oct, 11:22
“Conflicting pricing and a lack of target audience make the professional claims feel like generic marketing.”
Level 2 of 4 · Undercooked
12 points to Cooked
all open: 94
now 48
Raw 0–39UndercookedCooked 60Well done 80
6
locks on this page
+46
points in reach
94
could reach · Well done
Badges
- ✓First grill
- Cooked — reach 60
- Well done — reach 80
- Before and after — finish round 2
What will go wrong on launch day
Fatal · they leave before they understandCostly · they understand and still leaveDrag · it works, and could work better
- Potential problem
“Basic plan lists '$8 /매월' and '$10 매월'”
A visitor sees two different prices for the same tier and loses trust in the billing.
Proposalyou decideARemove the conflicting price points and show one clear monthly cost per tier. - Potential problem
“no audience named anywhere on the page”
A visitor doesn't know if this is for casual readers, professional scanlators, or businesses.
Proposalyou decideAAdd a 'For [X]' line to the hero, e.g., 'For manga scanlators and avid readers'. - Potential problem
“no pain stated before the product is introduced”
The product is presented as a solution to a problem the visitor hasn't been reminded of.
Proposalyou decideAAdd a section before the tool describing the struggle of manual translation or waiting for releases. - Potential problem
“만화 번역기로 만화를 모든 언어로 번역하세요”
A visitor sees a description of the tool's function rather than the benefit of using it.
Proposalyou decideAReplace the headline with the outcome, e.g., 'Read any manga in your language instantly'. - Potential problem
“no reason to act now stated in the copy”
Visitors bookmark the page to try later instead of committing to a plan today.
Proposalyou decideAAdd a limited-time launch discount or a 'first 100 users' bonus. - Potential problem
“99% 번역 정확도”
A stranger dismisses the number as a generic marketing claim without a verifiable source.
Proposalyou decideAReplace the percentage with a link to a public benchmark or a specific case study.
Don’t break these
The embedded tool interface allows immediate trial without scrolling.
The hero section's before/after slider provides instant visual proof of the product's core value.
The four axes
Every point comes from a test. Open a row, or read the rubric.
Clarity35% of the score4164
41
Audience18% of the score2225
22
Offer29% of the score21225
212
2 passed · 1 partial · 2 failed → 25. Weighted at 29%, this contributes 7.3 of the overall 48.
22.4 + 4.5 + 7.3 + 13.9 = 48.0 → 48.
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